Your final creation look fantastic! Well done for positively taking on feedback throughout the writing process, this has enabled you to write a well constructed information report packed with quality information. Was the scaffold that you made helpful?
Hi Emily, I really enjoyed reading report. I didn't know there were five different species of kiwi. Maybe next time you could include a some up of all your information at the end
Your final creation look fantastic! Well done for positively taking on feedback throughout the writing process, this has enabled you to write a well constructed information report packed with quality information. Was the scaffold that you made helpful?
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ReplyDeleteHi Emily, I really enjoyed reading report. I didn't know there were five different species of kiwi. Maybe next time you could include a some up of all your information at the end
ReplyDeleteHi Fiona, thank you for the feedback. I really enjoyed your writing, I was intrigued to read more. Also thank you for visiting my blog.
DeleteWow Emily you have great research skills. I have read and learnt some new facts on the Kiwi. Love the presentation.
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