Mary and Emily, you have collaborated really well to produce a great piece of writing that met all criteria. You have chosen an entertaining topic and used some engaging vocabulary. I look forward to reading more of your writing throughout the year! Miss J
I went on o=to Mary's blog to see your video, you both were very entertaining and made me have a laugh, which has been a great way to end the term. It would be great if you can get it posted on your blog too. I can't wait to see more recordings from you throughout the year!! Miss J
Mary and Emily, you have collaborated really well to produce a great piece of writing that met all criteria. You have chosen an entertaining topic and used some engaging vocabulary. I look forward to reading more of your writing throughout the year! Miss J
ReplyDeleteI went on o=to Mary's blog to see your video, you both were very entertaining and made me have a laugh, which has been a great way to end the term. It would be great if you can get it posted on your blog too. I can't wait to see more recordings from you throughout the year!! Miss J
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