LO: Show not tell, expand the sentence I was happy.
A bursting smile swept over her fair, soft face. Her slim body overfilled with joy as the warm, spring breeze gently skimmed her smooth skin. She gradually kicked up the orange and red delicate leaves. She fell to the grassy, wet ground and burst into a never ending laughter. She had never felt so powerful before, she understood that she was blessed with family, friends and joy!
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