Quick write

LO: Show not tell, expand the sentence I was happy.

A bursting smile swept over her fair, soft face. Her slim body overfilled with joy as the warm, spring breeze gently skimmed her smooth skin. She gradually kicked up the orange and red delicate leaves. She fell to the grassy, wet ground and burst into a never ending laughter. She had never felt so powerful before, she understood that she was blessed with family, friends and joy!

Quick write- Use a sentence starter!

"Come on no one will know, stop being scared!" Sven Teased.

"I don't think it is the right thing to do, two wrongs don't make a right" Jones whispered as he pulled Eden back. 

"They will never know it was us, please, he totally embarrassed you."  Eden pleaded.

"Fine, but I'm keeping watch I'm not going to throw slimy eggs at his house." Jones said

Eden agreed to the circumstances and started to haul the eggs all over his house. He then selected the silky white toilet paper and sent it flying over his gardens. That is when Billy turned up, he saw the state that his house was in and he saw the 2 annoying people who did this. Billy soon quickly sprinted after the two boys, but he wasn't fast enough. The boys swung through the front door and flied into Sven's room. 

"The cats out of the bag!" Sven whispered. 

Quick write!

Firework minefield!

“Leave me alone, I’m about to watch the lights in the sky!” Pauline bellowed. 

“What lights? There are no lights in the sky” Sally said as a confused look swept over her face.

“I mean the loud fireworks we planned!” Pauline reminded Sally. 

Sally jumped up in excitement, the young, small 4 yo girl was joyed. The loud fireworks had started and gave Pauline a startle. The sparking fireworks were everywhere, it was a minefield. They had to get out of their right away, they dodged as many fireworks as they could, but Sally slowly lay her foot on one that was ready to blow.

We had 5 minutes to complete this story. We were given a sentence starter which was - “Leave me alone, I’m about to watch the lights in the sky!” Pauline bellowed. 

Quick write

The smokey, misty air fulling the the back mysterious room. Nothing but blackness is to be seen, mice and rats scurry across the lino floor. The sound of laughter, music and beer bottles smashing to the ground. You run your hand along the cold walls to find the light, blinding light fills the empty space. Everything you touch is frozen solid, there is ice hanging from the shelf's of beer. You take deep breaths as you breathe in through your nose you smell something rotten, you lift your foot up to find dead rats.  



LO: We were asked to write a piece of writing that explained a setting, my setting was in the back room of a pub, we only got 5 minutes to do this.

Quick write

Paperback writer! 

Aria slowly walks down the street, her long, silky black hair swaying behind her. Her blue eyes dart from people to people trying to find her best friend Mia. Her friend walks up to her with a confused and disgusted look on her face, Aria’s friend was dressed a girly dress but Aria wore her best sweatpants, her plan t-shirt and her nike sneakers. Mia loved her friend not because of what she wore, but because she was sweet, kind and she had a good taste of music (Jazz)!

Quick write!

Appearance-

She has blue eyes, long black hair. She wears comfy clothes, one ear is bigger than the other. She always carries around her saxophone (which she can't play but she loves jazz)

Personality-

She is sweet and kind. She can have her mood swings from time to time. She is on an emotional roller coaster. She has faith in herself. She loves Jazz and she want to go to music school. 

Actions-

She left her home when she was 17 to live in her own apartment. She was threatened with a gun. she left highschool to go to music school.

How does the character change over time?- 

She used to be a terrible saxophone player. She now play the saxophone in her Jazz band. She works out more and eats healthier, she is a lot more healthier than she was before.

WALT-

We had 10 minutes to complete a backstory on a character that we made. The character had to be interested in weird, interesting music.   

Bobby Jones is an amazing athlete that is very well known for synchronized swimming. He has been through a lot to become a skillful synchronized swimmer. His dream was to compete in the Olympics, his dream did come true. Before he got into the Olympics he had was asked to show a retired synchronized swimmer his famous swimming. He went to jump into the pool when he wasn’t feeling to good, he thought he would be ok to continue but he was so so wrong. He ended being incredibly sick after it. The water got into his system and he ended up missing out on going to the Olympics.

Quick write- 3 little pigs PLOT

Quick write- A time with my friend!

My friend and I walked and walked along the path leading up to a miniature waterfall. We weren't planning on going swimming, but we ending up sticking our heads in the waterfall. The water was icy cold, the rapids were strong, they were leonine. We raced to the waterfall but soon came to an electric fence, we jumped over them, we were determined to go for a swim on a boiling day. We dipped our toes in the water, we pulled back we need photos. The waterfall was too beautiful to leave without a photo.